Pain Entwined

by TearsInTheRain   Nov 25, 2006


A girl rapped in a crimson red dress takes her last breath.
Her neck entwined in ivey, choking her to death,
She clenches the dead rose petals in her hand.
One last tear glides gently over her smooth, cold cheek.
This is her pain entwined.

Her face is beautiful, blushed with the cold,
Her raw body lies still, drenched in dew.
Her dress is ripped, and the edges bleed away from her,
Out from her body, and into the cold, dark night.

Seconds pass but feel like years,
Waiting for death to engulf her in its warm hands.
She longs for it to come and bring her away from this place, away from this pain.

This is her pain entwined,
In her heart, Forever.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    So sad and heart-aching,i like this

    Seconds pass but feel like years,
    Waiting for death to engulf her in its warm hands.

    Keep it up
    See ya
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Solus

    I wish pain would not follow us into the next life....

  • 18 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    Hi aido its me!I mean its becky, I changed my name to Miss Becky, you like? :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    You make me understand it cuz its your feelings, 10/10 aido!!! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem.5/5