Yup, lol most people o this site are teenagers anyways, they all will relate in some way or another :d

xxx alex xxx

This is very well done. It speaks of the trials and things that you go through as a teenager and then the good times that you have as well. It's very good. 5/5 for sure!

Much Love,
.:Danielle:L.

To be honest this one is good n I give u 4/5. Its a nice description of teenage life.

You really reflected the things as exploring so well
My fave lines should be;

Holding back my worries like I couldn't care less
Chilling with my mates that I forever bless

Well done hun,
Sincerely,
Laura

Very well-written. Nicely explains the generation.

[tragic]

What can I do when it all seems a riddle?
With the controls of my life people just seem to fiddle
I can't seem to think straight, I don't seem to see
Where my life is leading, what I really need

You managed to adhere to a rhyming scheme except " what I really need" you could make it rhyming by something like" what would I really be" Your poem is well written and its very explanatory. Great 5/5 of course

I like this poem, I love how you feel and how it relates to not only you but links with how many teenagers feel aswell. I am a teenager to and I know how you feel, but for me, it's about not knowing things that make life so good, and about how much people hurt you and they think its funny, now i think well i never saw that coming, but I take it all as an expierence and an opitunirty to learn, but rest asure, with all the things you dont no now, they will automatically come to mind later on in life with out even trying. I love the fact that you have writen it to try and help and express how teenagers feel aswell.
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