Times a Tickin (Song)

by Italian Stallion   Nov 25, 2006


Times a tickin
Oh what do you say
Will you come with me?

Walk though the depths
Of the night
With the help of the moonlight

So what do you say
Will you come?
Cause times a tickin

Times a tickin
Oh times a tickin

So what do you say?
Let's go out
And have some fun

Cause times a tickin
So what do you say?
Wanna go out and have some fun?

You only live once
In a lifetime
So what do you say?

Cause times a tickin

© Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

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  • 17 years ago

    by silvershoes

    I like how the first line of all of your poems really sets the mood. Times a tickin--I imagined a clock ticking throughout the song, setting the beat. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Love the beat and the energy, it could really be a song. great controling metaphors and best of luck.

    lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by ~me~

    Really good poem joe !!
    i was listening to the killers~ inde rock and roll
    while reading your poem and it really fit in (well the begining did)
    rather good if i may say so !
    5/5
    me x x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great song.5/5 i think that it would make a great country song;)

  • 17 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    This is very good joe, it has great flow and structure, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

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