Loved the poem.5/5
loved that you also excplained the style of it.

I absolutely love the title of this poem. I'm not sure why, it is just so vague but easy to find a hidden meaning in.

The first stanza is definitely my favorite. It's not really a prelude to the poem, but it's a good beginning.

The only things I don't like are the last two words. They seem a little out of place. But other than that, nice work.

Wonderful poem. 5/5. I loved it. Keep up the good work.

I like this type of rhyming,,, its rhyme with a twist... i like how the third line fit pretty well with each one... good job!