The Size Of Love

by Forever   Nov 25, 2006


I feel as if the moon would rain as crystals over us
If only I could touch your lips to mine
And stroke your gentle palm until
I lose all track of time
The sun would dissolve into stars and sparkle
As champagne in your eyes
As they wink into mine and shimmer
Discarding all the lies
By the sky, looming in all its power
Impossibly large, taller than the tallest tower
More beautiful than a budding flower…
But shrivelled and small in the face of love.

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  • 18 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    This is so beautiful. i love the imagry of the moon - what a great line. great poem x

  • 18 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    Oh it repeats soz I wont do it next time... lol
    i learnt my lesson, lol
    soz.. omg bye
    *shys away*

  • 18 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    Hey I like this poem, nice thorts,
    and oh btw your quote the stranger one,
    wth?
    that's not a quote honey, lol
    but it is interesting anyway, maybe you might want to go fix it up make it a quote like for instince...
    "What was this stranger saying to me? although I don't know what he meant, I know that we all will when they feel the pain he does" or something like that, but I mean, Don't forget in a quote you have to make it about everyone, you have to involve the people. For it has to reflect them as well as you...
    but anyway hideho, good job chap,
    lol, I am so tripping hehe,
    anyway have a look at my poems, lol, thanks if you do,
    keep the good work up,
    fire xx

  • 18 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    Hey I like this poem, nice thorts,
    and oh btw your quote the stranger one,
    wth?
    that's not a quote honey, lol
    but it is interesting anyway, maybe you might want to go fix it up make it a quote like for instince...
    "What was this stranger saying to me? although I don't know what he meant, I know that we all will when they feel the pain he does" or something like that, but I mean, Don't forget in a quote you have to make it about everyone, you have to involve the people. For it has to reflect them as well as you...
    but anyway hideho, good job chap,
    lol, I am so tripping hehe,
    anyway have a look at my poems, lol, thanks if you do,
    keep the good work up,
    fire xx

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