Did you notice

by jack   Nov 25, 2006


Yours eyes greener than grass
your skin clear than glass
the way you say our love was meant to last

your hair so straight
perfect in every way
but no longer can i wait
to shout out my love for you
i can not change it,
it is true

the way you write
the way you talk
your laugh your smile and your thoughts

from morning to night
i can't help that think we are going to be alright.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwwh, I thought this was really sweet, particularly the last line.
    I enjoyed the rhyme scheme although at times I found the flow to be a little jumpy, but apart from that it was beautiful.

  • 18 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Jack, what a nice poem! I really appreciate the comment on my work.. It means a lot to me!
    Welcome to the Site!

    XX Ciao Bella XX

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