Young death

by Caitlin Fedorak   Nov 25, 2006


Every one is dressed in black, everyone is crying.
This is the first time he's ever expreienced a loved one dying.
At an age so young, his mommys been taken away,
Even though she promised she was there to stay.

Her casket is being lowered into the grave,
"Be a good boy, promise you'll behave,
And don't forget your mommy loves you, my dear sweet child."
Those were her last words, they remained in his heart,
"Bye-bye Mommy," this is when they depart.
He feels like he is never again going to smile.

Five years later, he is eleven.
He doubts his dear mother ever made it to heaven.
She was an alcoholic, a total mistake,
The thought of her weakness made his heart ache.
She seemed so lovely, an angel missing from above,
But she couldn't even keep her promise, and give her child undoubtful love.
He felt abandoned in this cruel world,
And he hated his mother for it, she ruined his life.
He hoped she was in a place where she felt nothing but the stabbing of knvies.

Another five years passed, he is sixteen.
It seems he is like his mother, a total drinking machine.
Not only that, but he's into meth.
Sadly, this story results in another young death.

He was high and felt better than ever before,
That is, until his girlfriend flew through the car door.
She died almost instantly, as were two of his friends.
It was too much for him, he was at his wit's end.

Once he got home, he got out his knife,
And screamed to the world,
"Mom you ruined my life!"
Little did he know, he destroyed a life too,
For his girlfriend was pregnant, and in 3 months was due.

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  • 17 years ago

    by i.N.V.i.S.i.B.L.E ((2 HiM))

    That was really sad but yet really good! I loved it! 5 STARS

  • 18 years ago

    by Rene`a

    Omg this is so sad...i am going to post it on myspace in my bullentin....i can't belive it....i loved it i gave you a 5...

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