Marriage of Heart and Soul

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Nov 25, 2006


This is just one of those odd poems that come out; everyone has them... Enjoy.
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The steady pulse of the heart reside,
Hush! Listen losely to souls' pride,
Boasting surely to the hearts' bride,
This is where they soon abide.
United as one, heart and soul dance in glee,
Picking up each other, promising 'I'll never leave',
HOlding on tight to the groom to be;
Here romance is showed and given ecstasy.
Soul and heart joined together - look around,
Finally see how their love was found,
Dripping with pride they are bound,
To each other forever, to what their love has found.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Yet another great poem by you. I loved it. The flow was outstanding. Although I felt the structure was not that great, perhaps breaking it into stanzas would help.

    Ciao, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by emmerz

    Haha i love when you write something random and it ends up good! well, the only thing i can think of was the first line... is it reside or resideS? im not sure, but i think resideS would be better.... but other than that, the flow was great, the rhyming was flawless... good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is very good, i give it a 5/5!!! great flow and structure!!! keep it up!!!

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