This is very good, i give it a 5/5!!! great flow and structure!!! keep it up!!!

Haha i love when you write something random and it ends up good! well, the only thing i can think of was the first line... is it reside or resideS? im not sure, but i think resideS would be better.... but other than that, the flow was great, the rhyming was flawless... good job!

Yet another great poem by you. I loved it. The flow was outstanding. Although I felt the structure was not that great, perhaps breaking it into stanzas would help.

Ciao, Joe