Make up ur mind...

by Deelia   Nov 25, 2006


*When were 2gether its like heaven*
*But when ur gone its like he.ll*

*When we cuddle and kiss i grow*
*But when we talk (on the phone) u kill me*

*When ur with me ur so sweet*
*When ur with her ur the same*

*U tell me u care and will always be there*
*But with ur friends u say im a sl.ut and b.it.ch*

**PLZ MAKE UP UR MIND**
***I LUV U ALEX***

so this is the 1st "poem" ive rly ever written, and ik its not so good but its how im feelin so PLZ give me some pointers & comment!!! thx!!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Benjamin AmbersCry

    I loved it and I hate guys who cheat on their GF

  • 17 years ago

    by Princess

    This is so cute i love it hope everything gets better <3

  • 17 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    Thanks for the comment i really appriciated it! i think this is actually a really good first poem...all i have to say is if you want us to really feel whats going on put some vivid details in there and make us feel exactly how you are feeling...keep up the good work..and this guy Alex...he must be a loser lol...jk...keep smiling=]

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