Thanks for the comment i really appriciated it! i think this is actually a really good first poem...all i have to say is if you want us to really feel whats going on put some vivid details in there and make us feel exactly how you are feeling...keep up the good work..and this guy Alex...he must be a loser lol...jk...keep smiling=]

This is so cute i love it hope everything gets better <3

I loved it and I hate guys who cheat on their GF