Will I ever be successful in life also?
Will I ever have a good career?
Will I have a house?
Will I have a good husband with kids?
Will I ever live out my dreams and cry all this hidden pain away from me?

Some of the questions we all ask ourselves. Lovely. Could deffinately relate. I don't think anything's wrong with you either. =P Mwahh, Aymz

This was my favourite out of the three I've read of yours. I liked the questions asked in it, it gives off a worried, panicky atmosphere, which creates suspence and interesting. Very good.

Wow.. this actually made me cry... I have thought almost all of those thoughts really late at night to the point where I don't sleep cause of it. I hope that you are ok :) But you did a really good job on this poem.. very well written. 5/5

A sad one, but written so nicely,
there been nites in my life when i had that kind of feelings........i know how it feel. great job once again. 5/5 from me.

Wow. i loved it. it makes you think a lot about everything, about life. beautiful.

Hun, all i can say is why are we sharing a life, no seriously i feel that way too. but good poem