by The Lonely Rose Nov 26, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Feeling hurt.. |
by Bridgette
Awww... this is such a sad and heartbreaking poem and I can relate to it completely. It sucks to love someone who loves someone else.. But I think that you did an amazing job portraying your emotions in this.. Keep it up && Stay strong! 5/5 |
Very sad. :( It was a bit jumpy and didn't really flow as well as it could have, but it was very well expressed and the emotin was greatly conveyed. Nice work. |
by Brittany C
Very good poem. keep up the good work. |
I know how it is to feel this way thats how i feel with my ex gurl. im sorry |