I know how it is to feel this way thats how i feel with my ex gurl. im sorry

Very good poem. keep up the good work.

Very sad. :( It was a bit jumpy and didn't really flow as well as it could have, but it was very well expressed and the emotin was greatly conveyed. Nice work.

Awww... this is such a sad and heartbreaking poem and I can relate to it completely. It sucks to love someone who loves someone else.. But I think that you did an amazing job portraying your emotions in this.. Keep it up && Stay strong! 5/5