Comments : Shoulder To Lean On

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I need you to finish my sentences
    When I am confused
    Guide me back to earth
    When I have been used

    ^^ Loved this stanza ...especially the first sentence....I also loved your ending ...good way to bring your poem all together! THis was a great poem and I really enjoyed reading it!
    Chelsey

  • 18 years ago

    by Alicesjourney

    I loved your poem, every part of it. But I have to dissagree with *♥Chelsey♥* with the ending, the last paragraph was the one I liked the least

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    A very sweet poem and it describes what we all want in a friend, just need to be sure we give it back!
    Charisma*