From the very flame that started this to the ash that ended IT all

'it' was the word I put in there that seemed to make it a better sentence to read, for me at least. Also 'dealt' is spelled with an 'a' after the 'e'. Very minor things that I picked up from a nonetheless good poem. 5/5

This is exactly how i feel gr8 use of a burning city to express how u feel!your very talented!!lurve kitten x