I'll Always Love You

by Delie   Nov 26, 2006


I'll Always Love You

Love is a strong word,
Shouldn't just be tossed around...
Does anybody love me?
No... I'm falling to the ground...

Hopelessly trying,
To win you over,
It's like I'm trying too hard,
But the days with you I savour...

I know I'll have to give up,
It's not like you'll pick me,
It'll be her again...
And I'll never find my bee...

Why do I love you?
Why go through this pain?
Everyday...
Over and over again...

Withering away,
Like a helpless flower...
Dying inside,
Losing all my power...

I have one last thing to say,
Before I wither away...
I'm staying true,
Which means I'll always love you!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a great poem. It is like what I feel for the guy I like. I asked him out and he said no but i still love him.
    5/5. great read.

    Kalee

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I know exactly how you feel I can so... realate to this poem...it was fantastic nice job you have great talent

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Overall, this was a good poem. I felt like it was wordy in a few areas and some of your rhyme schemes did not work. like the over & savour and me & bee.

    other than that. I enjoyed it. very good. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    The first stanza reminded me of my poem'despite the flaws' and 'thank you'(--> i dont know why though.)

    anyway. i love the poem, the wording was nicely chosen.

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenSoul

    Awww.... thats cute.. yet sad at the same time..

    :D I can relate to that as well

    Awsome peom 5/5

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