Awww.... thats cute.. yet sad at the same time..

:D I can relate to that as well

Awsome peom 5/5

The first stanza reminded me of my poem'despite the flaws' and 'thank you'(--> i dont know why though.)

anyway. i love the poem, the wording was nicely chosen.

Overall, this was a good poem. I felt like it was wordy in a few areas and some of your rhyme schemes did not work. like the over & savour and me & bee.

other than that. I enjoyed it. very good. 5/5

I know exactly how you feel I can so... realate to this poem...it was fantastic nice job you have great talent

This is a great poem. It is like what I feel for the guy I like. I asked him out and he said no but i still love him.
5/5. great read.

Kalee