What happened

by Fazolis   Nov 26, 2006


As they walk
by the coffin
that holds their
friend

they think what
they could have
done to change
how she felt

as they look at
her face to see it
one last time
they think how pretty she
she was and is

they ask why
would she do this
she acted like she was fine but what was she hiding

the loneliness
the depression
she couldn't take it
so she ended it

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. And you had a great flow.
    There was only one thing I saw that would make it better.
    The last sentence in the thired stanza could be split in half.
    But other then that the poem is great.5/5

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