Don't Give Up

by BeautifulxMess   Nov 26, 2006


It's not over so don't end life.
Keep your head up in the sky.
Keep the dreams that you dote.
For your the controller of your hope.

Dreams won't always come true.
It's because you don't trust YOU.
Life will get hard to get under control
But you can't let your life go.

Love won't see you through.
You can't give up on whats new.
Compassion of another will come.
Don't let life go cause of someone.

Always be real and say that you can
A wish will bring you a helping hand.
Believe, your desires will arrive.
Then, one day you can fly.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Awesome poem. A very true poem. I loved it. Keep up the great work.5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    Great message i really enjoyed reading this x

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great poem by you, you have a unique style which is one of the best, keep up the great work like always. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by вℓєє∂ιиg.тєαяѕ ♥

    Life will get hard to get under control

    ^^ Don't use "get" twice, it doesn't sound too good

    Don't let life go cause of someone.

    ^^ I don't think you should use "cause" it sounds kind of tacky

    I didn't like this one as much as I felt it didn't flow as well or the you used great detail and vocabulary. So it can be improved in those areas. 4/5

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