Awhh, that was soo sweet hunn. The flow was good as were the rhymes. The descriptions worked well and the vocabulary was great. I loved how you repeated the last line. Did you know this is a Kyrielle? Lol, just wondering. 5/5

Great poem, you have showed a great poetry style in this poem, keep it up. 5/5

Very good poem. Has a great flow to it. keep up the good work.5/5

Wow that was a lovely poem. I like the way you wrote it....5/5 keep it up.