Some one said

by deadman   Nov 26, 2006


Some one said they loved me
some one said they cared
that person told me forever
but then she disappeard

she took everything i had
and left me crying
but what hurt the most was
she left smiling

i should have known
i guess i was just blind
scarred of being alone
scared of the kid inside

instead of realizing it then
im dieing over it now
leting the vodka and pills
take over the whys and hows

loosing natural ability
to fight for my own life
but why sould i worry
vodka and pills
will never leave my side

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  • 11 years ago

    by Sidh Swabhav

    Healthy thoughts dwell in a healthy body.
    Try to avoid addiction of pills and alcohol.
    We can overcome our pain and sorrow when we see it and face it. Facing difficult time makes us strong. I know it's an unbearable pain, but don't make yourself weak. You are a 'hope'for your family and friends.
    I liked the lines:
    "i should have known
    i guess i was just blind
    scarred of being alone
    scared of the kid inside"

  • 11 years ago

    by Biancas Veil

    Terribly sad but the poem flows nicely great work.

  • 14 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww.. woow this poem is sooo sad... your deep emotions really show and you've written about a feeling many people go through and as a result of heartbreak do things like drink and take pills... i hope you don't actually do that though! great poem!

  • 14 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    Loved it

  • 14 years ago

    by XxLastHopexX

    Thats so sad....i'm sorry...but at least you can say you wrote an amazing poem...great job