Comments : Go live your own life

  • 17 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    Interesting!!! 5!

  • 17 years ago

    by John

    Good poem. i relate well

  • 17 years ago

    by AliveAndEmpty

    OMG I absolutely love it!! Wait, 3 guesses who.. I'm going to use 1, even though its pretty obvious. (watch I'll get it wrong) Jimmy...wait... no....yea....Jimmy. Am I wrong?? I proly am. I'm just samrt like that. Anywho.. Comment mine, that isn't taht wonderful, that you probably just commented as I posted this, but w/e. Love ya sis.

    Emily

  • 17 years ago

    by t. h a l l i d a y *

    Wow... I loved the flow in this one, and the choice of words. Keep writting!

    Thalliday xo

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this!
    I thought the last stanza was amazing, it had huge impact, and was really powerful.
    I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and flow, I thought they worked really well.