Being-Human-Fear

by The Angel of Secrets   Nov 26, 2006


I've figured out, I have this fear,
the reason for my mood, and every single tear.
I have never told anyone, so I write it down in inc,
A fear of being imperfect, to not be what they think.
A fear of disappointing, a fear of letting down,
Knowing that I am the reason, reason for their frown.
I hate it when it happens, I'm just not good enough.
I will never let them see, that I'm really not that though.
I'm afraid to show my faults, because I have so many,
To do so many things, and not succeed at any.
So this is the reason that I cry, and that I shed a tear.
I guess I can name it something, it's a being-human-fear.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is my favourite of your's so far.
    I thought the flow was a little jumpy in a couple of places, but the meaning behind the poem was so strong that I didn't really mind.

  • 17 years ago

    by вℓєє∂ιиg.тєαяѕ ♥

    This was good but it did have a few places where the flow was a little awkward. Nice job though 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    This is written so well hun! I can relate to this. It's filled with plenty of emotion, and it flows flawlessly! I can't say anymore than that i love this! Excellent! =] Keep it up. 5/5

    Love,
    Tammie xo

  • 17 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    Great poem. very well put. i'm sure many others share your fears too x

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