Great poem. very well put. i'm sure many others share your fears too x

This is written so well hun! I can relate to this. It's filled with plenty of emotion, and it flows flawlessly! I can't say anymore than that i love this! Excellent! =] Keep it up. 5/5

Love,
Tammie xo

This was good but it did have a few places where the flow was a little awkward. Nice job though 5/5

This is my favourite of your's so far.
I thought the flow was a little jumpy in a couple of places, but the meaning behind the poem was so strong that I didn't really mind.