The poem did not seem forced/over wordy. I did find this like awkward though:
When can't feel anything at all
It should be when you can't feel anything at all to maybe flow a bit better. It was te only line I stumbled on and for readers it might take them out of the moment you as the writer are trying to create.

This is very similar to what I'm feeling right now.. I think this poem is very well written, there's just a couple of things that I think need fixing..
In the first stanza, last line.. I think it should be 'But I could give plenty OF room for doubt' and
2nd stanza, 2nd line should be.. 'When YOU can't feel anything at all'..

I think it would make more sense by adding in those words.. other than though, I think You did a wonderful job on expressing your feelings and it flowed really nicely too.. well done 5/5 xx

I loved this poem. You are a great poet. I only wish that this poem was a little longer but other then that please never change it. It is great the way it is:) 5/5

I really liked this poem, i think it flowed great and was very well written.... it was very interseting to read, i could relate to it... keep up the work 5/5

This is a very good poem bridgette, great structure and flow, i give it a 5/5!!! you've got talent, keep it up!!!

Great poem. i think the flow needed some work, but theres a reason why this got straight 5s ;) good job

This was an amazing job. && this poem is very true though like you said it's not really a cutting poem but if you think about it as many times as people cut they keep on telling the people the same thing over && over again later on there not going to be there to help you because there going to be so sick of it, it's unreal. very nice.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always && forever.

Wow, very strong meaning. I think that's the best part about this poem, it's expressed wonderfully.

The flow is a little off in some places-- one thing I noticed right away was the last line of the first stanza. It seems choppy and there are too many syllables. Other than that, though, the poem is quite good. I enjoyed reading it. Nice work!

O..i can relate to this really well....its a great poem..good flow a 5/5 from me

Great poem 5/5 :) well done keep it up

I like this alot. I am sort of feeling how this poem is lately, so I understand how you wanted it to sound. I really do like it. :]

x CheLs

Love it ^-^

OMG! great poem i feel the same way all the time!

Impressive. You let other readers, such as myself, know how to say what they're feeling because they couldn't put words to it, and you did it very well.

WOW THIS IS SOOOO GOOD, LIKE OH MY GOD U ARE ONE OF MY IODLS NOW!!!!! PLEASE COMMENT MY POEMS SEE WHAT U THINK OF THEM... U R SOO GOOD,
LOVE TO HEAR FROM YAH GORGEOUS,
KAC XX

For me your poem was pure emotion. Any reader struggling with sadness in their lives could very easily relate to this and thats part of what makes it so good.

I really like this poem, it flows really good, and it describes exactly how I'm feeling right now. 5/5

Wow, i love it...Its good.
I feel you though...

What a lovely words

im s sorry to you

you feel so sad i wish you the very best luck

I liked this poem of yours. Good words and just in the right places. Keep up the good writes