Heartache Tonight

by Sarah Ann   Nov 26, 2006


Hearts are burning for each other,
Desire ringing in their ears
Perspiration falls for one another
Like happiness and salted tears

His hands gently find her body
Caressing souls step forth, ignite
Yet, it is unfortunate what is coming
There will be heartache tonight

'Don't stop now,' she would whisper
Whilst he rushes down to kiss her
Let love making last forever
Whilst young hearts are very tender

And as quickly as the fire burned
As she lies there; heart a flutter
He is dressing...yes, he earned
'Where you going?' she would utter

Life is crashing as it began
She clutches the sheets, tears a falling
Heart is bleeding, here comes agony
...Incoherent words she's calling

He is oh so sinful and satisfied
Another woman exposed in sorrow
There will be heartache tonight
And misery on the morrow

Hearts are burning for each other,
Desire ringing in their ears
Perspiration falls for one another
Like happiness and salted tears

His hands gently find her body
Caressing souls step forth, ignite
Yet, it is unfortunate what is coming
There will be heartache tonight

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  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    OMGoodness!! Sarah, I effing loved this!! I love the flow, structure...everything. And i love how you repeated the stanzas...my jeebus!! i don't know what to say!! lol I just loved it!!!!

    -Liz

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    An amazing poem.. The rhythmn and flow was excellent, and the poem itself quite sad.. Very well written.. Well done 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very good poem. I really liked it. Keep up the good work.5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    Wow what a great poem, you captured a young man's thoughts to a"T", and young lass feeling sad as he goes.
    Very Good poem

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I loved how you repeated the first two stanza's at the end, very effective. I thought this was excellent. A beautiful poem, with a sadness flowing throughout.

    Awesome work.