by Sarah Ann Nov 26, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
Hearts are burning for each other, |
by Liz
OMGoodness!! Sarah, I effing loved this!! I love the flow, structure...everything. And i love how you repeated the stanzas...my jeebus!! i don't know what to say!! lol I just loved it!!!! |
by donna
An amazing poem.. The rhythmn and flow was excellent, and the poem itself quite sad.. Very well written.. Well done 5/5 xx |
by Brittany C
Very good poem. I really liked it. Keep up the good work.5/5 |
by Edward D Zurovec
Wow what a great poem, you captured a young man's thoughts to a"T", and young lass feeling sad as he goes. |
I loved how you repeated the first two stanza's at the end, very effective. I thought this was excellent. A beautiful poem, with a sadness flowing throughout. |