by Rahl The Layman Lord Nov 26, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Why are people so afraid to live |
That is all so true about people., great observation and that was such a hard topic but you wrote that most beautifully...great jobb. |
Wonderful |
by Alison Ellis
Wow, this really was an amazing poem. 5/5 for sure. you write some pretty moving things. |
by silvershoes
So basically...if you're depressed, you are dead? That's something I can somewhat agree with. You feel dead, true. But you are choosing to shun those that feel dead, in the hopes that they just fade away or heal themselves. Interesting. I think this is too general of an opinion, but interesting nonetheless. Seems more like preaching than poetry as well. Still, you pulled it off. 5/5 from me! |
Wow awesome poem!!!!!! its verry ture!!! keep it up! |