Hey dude, this makes someone think about his own life, very nice indeed. I can't relate to anything, cause I am one hell of a happy guy hehe, but I know that it is true, though its one hell of a problem. Suicide all around us, nothing to do, don't wanna be "the helper" all the time, ay?
Well great written dude, keep it up.
Mark

Great poem and the reader can see wat u mean if his/her mind thinks like ours. the truth hurts but without truth we are nobody

Excellent poem.5/5. what u've stated is so true. ur a great writer. keep it up

Darken not my doorstep...that was cool! i liked the way u wrote it! Its true and very poignant! i loved it! Great work of art!

Answer this u think understand life im curious this is another good piece of work--good one sista

That was deep i really like that

O wow this is an extremely *whenithinkofagoodwordtodecribeit* poem!!!

Wow thats very good i like it. it is really true i wish i was the opposite of what u were talkin about i wish i was "ALIVE"

Ok, This was very well written, but not structured at all, try putting it into stanzas. Also instead of using slang words example: "U" use the real word, "you" you will be looked upon better as a poet then anything else, spelling is big in poetry unless you are doing a slang poem. Other than that, it really wasn't bad at all. Great Job.

Peace, Joe

Omg that was so beautiful to me i really liked i hope that you keep writing and keep up that wonderfull writing of yours......

This is really good man! i didnt now you were this good at this stuff and you never told me... well.. i see how it is! jk its really good

Thats really good.keep up the good work

I don't know what i think. part of it makes sense, part of it is so generalised it's ridiculous. no matter how much you force your presepective on a situation onto somebody involved, you'll never get them to see beyond the circumstances they're in. stop trying to inspire people with in depth analysis of their lives. you won't help. you can't tell people how they feel or how what they're doing is making them feel. you'll only reinforce the fact that nobody understands them.

in relation to your poem, you phrase things well, but i didn't like the content. well done for expression.x

Very good poem. keep up the good work. 5/5

Very good poem. keep up the good work. 5/5

Very good poem. keep up the good work. 5/5

Wow i love it it! is so good. you did a great job! you should really write some more.

Wow awesome poem!!!!!! its verry ture!!! keep it up!
-kels

So basically...if you're depressed, you are dead? That's something I can somewhat agree with. You feel dead, true. But you are choosing to shun those that feel dead, in the hopes that they just fade away or heal themselves. Interesting. I think this is too general of an opinion, but interesting nonetheless. Seems more like preaching than poetry as well. Still, you pulled it off. 5/5 from me!

Wow, this really was an amazing poem. 5/5 for sure. you write some pretty moving things.