by Sorefromreality Nov 26, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I love you. three simple words cant explain it all. i love you more than u can ever imagine. i will love you if u leave me and if i die today. i will love you if u tell me u no longer love me. i will love you if the stars fall from the sky, and if the moon does too. i will love you in the end, until we say "i do." i hope u know u are my world, and the reason i keep going. i will love u if the sun never shines again, or if it never stops snowing. i will love u if u never call, or if we never meet. i will love you with every bone in my body, from my head down to my feet. i hope u kno ill love u if we part. i love you with every single beat of my heart. and just in case u forgot already, i am so in love with you. and if u were to die today, i would die with you. |
Such a beautifully written poem. Very true, if you love someone, then I Love You just doesn't seem to be enough. I think it would be easier to read in a poem sturcture, but either way, it was a great poem!! Keep up the good work! |
I like this poem its very good |
by ♥Cindy♥
Man that poem was nice. |
by Tammie
Wow, although its not written in a poem structure, it's excellent. The title is so true, and it's eye-catching too.. suits what the poem is about perfectly. It flows well, and says alot. I can relate, and will have love for a certain person of my own just like you descibed in this poem. I love it. It's unique. Keep it up hun. =] 5/5 |