My gosh I'm sorry! I know how you feel. a good friend of mine commited suicide last month...his face still haunts me..good poem. very..raw.

xox
ally

This is a sad but very good poem, i wish i could write like you when i was your age, i give it a 5/5!!! your talented, keep it up!!!

Good poem with strong feelings clearly conveying your internal state and well being. I can c that your love is in the poem. Its nice, keep writing. Good work

Your friend
Fsams