You Stole My Heart (edited)

I love this poem...I love the bit where u wrote

You have opened my heart,
and now love floods my heart.
I don't know what the future may hold,
I only hope that you are in it.

^^
Love dat line
Just beatiful hun
5/5 for sure....

Very good, liked it alot

Very nice poem but i agree with above that something was missing

I didn't want it,
I didn't expect it,
You have found the key,
I tried so hard to hide,

i dont know why but this part makes me think
alot of us try to hard to escape from the world
we hide ourselves away so we cant get hurt
this poem inspires me alot
its so beautiful :)

Ehhhh, I can't say I was too much of a fan of this poem, it was pretty cliche.. it had meaning to it, yet.. I really was looking for you to be more original with this.. its a short little thought, and I thought you could have expanded it on a lot more than you did here. I get how youre feeling, but dig deeper into your emotions and spill more of you onto the paper.. for us to see. Emotions are key in a poem, and if you portray them nicely and go in depth with them.. you are bound to have a masterpiece.. this poem however.. I saw that you kind of lacked it.. you shortened your emotions up in a really short poem.. it siad something.. but you needed to dig deeper. Make sense?
Hmm. 4/5.