I gave it 4/5
it wasn't your best.missing something

The flow was a bit rocky!
but i understood the meaning of the poem!
keep it up!

I liked it!! 5!!!1

The flow and rhythm werent that good but i liked the stroy behind it so ill give u a 4/5.... keep up the work ^_^

Hey good poem nice and simple but effective. the only thing i would say is broaden ur language a bit more

:D Very good! I loved it. Keep up the good work!

~~Spanish

Nice poem like always, keep it up. 5/5

Well, I aint much of a love poem reader. You got no rimes, that I miss, though a poem don't need it, rimes makes poems flow. I like that you expresses your feelings in few words, thats truely love.
Mark

Wow i know exactly what you mean in that poem i liked it.. it would be better if you expressed your fealings more tho. 4/5

Good job!! keep it up 5/5

Thats sweet

This is a wonderful write. You can feel the love in this write. I wish you the best.

sadaddy

I kinda agree with ben at the top i loved it, i gave it a 5 but it would be sooo much better if you switched up ur words a little bit

Aww.....im sorta going through the same thing so i can understand...keep on writing....GReat poem!!

This was good but the flow and description needs work. Nice job though 4/5

Great job. My favorite part was the images of a key opening your heart. You could add more of those descriptions. Also, "my" should be "May"

I don't know what the future my hold,
-I think you meant "may" and "my"

anyway, this poem was really good. it was short but straight to the point. wonderful job on it. i can relate to it a lot. there is so much emotion in it. keep it up 5/5

~Kristina

I LOVE IT!
I know exactly how you feel with this.
:] Great Job.
Amazzzing. :]

It was alright.. but i think you need to explain yourself a little more.

Awe! Cutest poem like EVER! this is so sweet =] 5/5 definitely