by *Charisma* Nov 26, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
When the colors change on the trees, |
Amazing!! i love this poem.. very unique and its a nice touch how each stanza ends with the same line... amazing i just wow.. i really love this poem.. perfect rhyme perfect flow.. way more than 5/5! |
One of my friends is going through a bitter divorce right now and all of their friends have taken sides. Most of them she lost, but I copied this poem and sent it to her, I hope that's alright. It said exactly what I wanted her to know, that I'd be there for her. |
I really like this! Keep it up! && Thanks for the constructive criticism, it'll help me get better! |
by donna
I just read this poem in the contest before You commented on mine and thought exactly the same thing You are thinking lol, that Yours is so god and it beats mine easily.. guess we'll have to wait and see hehe.. |