I just read this poem in the contest before You commented on mine and thought exactly the same thing You are thinking lol, that Yours is so god and it beats mine easily.. guess we'll have to wait and see hehe..

Excellent job on this, it is written superbly.. everything about it is excellent.. well done Hun 5/5 xx

Oh and good luck for the contest ;]

I really like this! Keep it up! && Thanks for the constructive criticism, it'll help me get better!
xoxo

One of my friends is going through a bitter divorce right now and all of their friends have taken sides. Most of them she lost, but I copied this poem and sent it to her, I hope that's alright. It said exactly what I wanted her to know, that I'd be there for her.

Great job
Jeannie

Amazing!! i love this poem.. very unique and its a nice touch how each stanza ends with the same line... amazing i just wow.. i really love this poem.. perfect rhyme perfect flow.. way more than 5/5!