I have read your profile and am so sorry for your loss. i to have lost my husbad. I know the pain and lonlines you face everyday! You write beautifuly. I know that writing is the best way to relive the pain. Ever feel like talking I am here! Cindy

Beautiful...if i could give more than a 5 i certainly would. Keep it up, and thankyou kindly for your comment on my own poem. -x-

Hi thanks for comenting. my poems about two school friends of mine who were killed by a drink driver. ur poems are lovely and well written i am too sory for ur loss. thanks again

I'm extremely sorry about your losses && while I can't say I know how you feel I can tell you that I know part of it. I've lost many in these past two months. However, this was a great poem. 5/5

-T. Jane

Very good painful write. i have endured much pain through loss and can relate 5/5

Your poets heart unfurls itself willingly and lends its words to us to float and drift among our own words. Good work, I enjoyed your poem and look forward to more.