I can see your pain.
you are a good writer
keep up the good work
and read my poem called Death

Nice...

Wow that was very touching. i have had that feeling and u no my bestfriend and the guy i LIKED went out. owell i got ova it. u r an amazing riter keep it up!
god bless
xx justwant2smile

Yea i like it! My bestie jus left me n i wish she cared 4 me like i do her! But yea i understand it n keep writting!

Very deep fair play, i can feel ur pain n frustration.know the feeling. check out me poems tell me wot u think

An unusual poem and very emotional...what else can I say.
Charisma*

I like it.

This poem is brilliant from someone of ur age. did it come from a personal experience? if it did uve been thru a hell of a lot b4 ur time! great poem! dont giv up writing! xx

Wow, that's really effective! Most people can relate to it, and it's just sooo great that you spent so much time thinking about it!

I like this poem its really good!!!!!!

Yo dis is some good wordz. Keep up da good work and make sure u are strong and keep ya hed up when IT HURTS.

Stay Playa,
SC

Your a good writer! I love it!

Always
Outsider

Wow. That's definitely what I feel right now, that life/love/death hurts. Check out my poem "I Hate You"
5/5
HurtandBroken

I think this was a good poem and that you have good potential of being a poet. keep up the good work!!

[now go read mine!!. lol]

Sometimes in life thats all its about
-well done

Wow that was pretty good, it was neat and personal good job..plz do rate and comment on mine thnx
ch!ld~of~Darkness

Hey! That is so true. Life does hurt and many of my friends have committed suicide before and many more have threatened to do it. And it does hurt when the people you love want to leave this world so fast. It was a very good poem and I'll be sure to read more of your work some time soon.

Great poem keep up the good work

Loved it...5/5

First and last verse are my favorites!! the first verse, i can really, really relate to it....and i know it hurts alot, but love hurts and it also sucks