When You Fall..

by Blackthistle   Nov 26, 2006


Does it mean you are weak?
Does it mean you are small?
Does it mean you are short?
Even when you are tall?
Does it mean you are stupid?
Does it mean you are mean?
Does it mean you are violent?
And won't change what you've been?
Does it mean you are ugly?
Does it mean you are spiteful?
Does it mean you are dreadful?
And horrid and frightful?
Does it change who you are?
Does it change where you've been?
Does it change when you lost?
And when are your wins?
When you fall
When you sit
When you refuse to stand
You are merely asking
For someone's hand.
And when they look down
At your form from above
When they kick and scream
When they push and shove
Does it mean they are weak?
Does it mean they are small?
Does it mean they are short?
Even when they are tall?
Does it mean they are stupid?
Does it mean they are mean?
Does it mean they are violent?
And won't change what they've been?
Does it mean they are ugly?
Does it mean they are spiteful?
Does it mean they are dreadful?
And horrid and frightful?
Does it change who they are?
Does it change where they've been?
Does it change when they lost?
And when are their wins?
If it doesn't change you,
Why should it happen to them?

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I know it is repetitive but the point is to show that you should not return any ill favors to them. 2 wrongs don't make a right. If they do wrong, help correct them by not letting it affect you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    I love what you're trying to say in this. i think the repetition works really well in getting your point across x