I wont ever leave you, and im sorry.
very good poem tho.

This is a really great poem. You don't have to take my advice but if I were you I would let her read the poem and tell her how you really feel. Life is too short to worry about the what if's. I don't really know the situation, but if it's possible got for it, you sound like a really awsome guy, so why would'nt she fall in love with you. Anyways you probably think this jsut a bunch of crap but I really mean it and I hope you take what I said into consideration.
P.S. If you ever want to talk my email is homie_janae@yahoo.com

Another great poem man, you totaly rock here. I hope she gets it. lol. take care. and yeah 5/5 from me