by TRAGiC BEAUTY Nov 27, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I hope you know what you did |
by LAUREN
Ignore this boy u r in love w/. if someone doesnt want to be with u, they are not even worth it : ) |
by *Charisma*
I like your poem, but my one suggestion is to work on the flow more. You definitely know what you want to say, and you say it well, but try and make the lines have more structure to them and I think you could make the poem even better! |