Comments : I Hope You know

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I like your poem, but my one suggestion is to work on the flow more. You definitely know what you want to say, and you say it well, but try and make the lines have more structure to them and I think you could make the poem even better!
    Charisma*

  • 18 years ago

    by LAUREN

    Ignore this boy u r in love w/. if someone doesnt want to be with u, they are not even worth it : )