by Scrittore Nov 27, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
You’re my alarm clock at sunrise |
by DavidBrendan
I liked it's simplicity and the easygoing way it rhymed. It seemed to get a little more heady the last stanza, less simple but it was still very nice nonetheless. 5/5 but I think that the last stanza could be made to follow the flow of the rest of the poem much better |