Elements of Love

by Michael D Nalley   Nov 27, 2006


If I were earth would you be my seed?
We could grow what we really need
If I were the ocean would you be my little fish?
If I were a deep well you would be my only wish?
If I needed a breath would you be my air?
Blowing free like the wind without a care
If I were cold would you be my warmth from above?
Then we would have all that we need to make love?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    I liked this. it's sweet and caring. one thing though, I would not have put a question mark on the last line because it sounds like you are unsure. other than that it's still a 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I like this piece.. I especially liked the way that you asked the questions.. it's really sweet. The last two lines were really good and probably stood out to me the most. But you did a great job on this poem! 5/5

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