I like this piece.. I especially liked the way that you asked the questions.. it's really sweet. The last two lines were really good and probably stood out to me the most. But you did a great job on this poem! 5/5

I liked this. it's sweet and caring. one thing though, I would not have put a question mark on the last line because it sounds like you are unsure. other than that it's still a 5/5!