Comments : Long Overdue

  • 17 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    I read this already. I thought the message was very clear and unobscured through the stanzas. Innnnteresting. Let's see what kenny has to say.

  • 17 years ago

    by Aken Sol

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    Honestly, I think you're back to to, if not farther in your level of poetic skills from the time before you took a break. The words and what you mean though, no matter how true it seems or how well you put up a front about it, is at least partially untrue. I think you're still a big softie on the inside, even if girls had made your exterior a bit rougher.

    Love the lion reference. ROAR!

    Aken Sol