by ~_~Beautiful_native_chick~_~ Nov 27, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
We were meant to be |
by Sammib
Wow... talk about a roller coaster... your emotions come through very strongly here, but if I could give you a piece of advice, try an structure it a bit more so that it doesnt all run into each other... stop and take a breath...very nicely written though.. and really honest, sincere emotion!! |