Hay tash this was gud u showed alot of emotion.

Hey tash, im love this poem. if u like the style of he poem of mine that you read and commented on 'don't make my mistakes' then try reading my poem 'is that me' although thank-god the one i want you to read now isn't true like the other one it just has a similar style sort of but yea it is my fave poem i hope u will read it and like it. once again tash cool poem gal.

Dreams are your minds way of trapping you

I find this to be really true, I totally agree with you. I think whether we are dreaming or whether we are living in reality, we still always seem to end up at square one. Being trapped. We're trapped in our dreams, and we're drapped in reality. So how do we escape? Excellent poem! Dark and chilling.

Take Care:)