Oh wow. Nice job mark! It flows really well. I like it alot 5/5

Wow, great job at conveying all your dark emotions. great rythm to it-you can feel the anger ... x

That was a great poem...I felt every part of it. It was excellent. 5/5!!!!!

Another day of eternal Doom... that was a cool line to me...it was a great poem! i can relate to a lot that u have said great job! keep it up!

Brilliant poem! a job well done..

Very good it has a lot of emotion in it i like it good job

Hey i like this one

Strong....a very strong poem.
You put a lot of emotion into this one and it made it an amazing poem at whole.

Another day of eternal Doom

^ My favorite line. I don't know why but it just stuck out at me a lot. =]
Wonderful job overall, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Comment #1:
After I read that all I could say is wow! I mean so many people write these kinds of poems and then they kill themselves and then they talk about being dead. But this was like leaving hell while still being there. I hope that made some kind of sense, lol. Anyways, congrats on placing and thanks for entering I really liked it!
~Midnight Sun

I looooove this one. Its really great!!!
~Lindsay

I really enjoyed this poem, its darkness is very real and open. I especially love the line "inside it I am only a shadow of myself". beautiful way to end your piece! 5/5

~jas~