Awww that is so cute. I bet you she loves it. =] You did an awesome job on this. You are a really good writer. That is why you ahve been on my favorites for a year now. Hehe. =]

>black&&blue

Aahhh, that's sooo sweet:)

Wow, nicely written poem, well done like always. keep it up.

That was really sweet.... I loved it, and I'm sure your sister did as well.....A lovely and unique write about a girl that I'm sure is very special to you.

In times of trouble we stood together
We made a bond to keep forever
^^although it's a good line, the whole bond thing seemed a bit cliche.

Her soul so pure with angel's wings
She guides me through difficult things
^^^ I think the word 'so' should be taken out....It's a really good sentance but maybe "her soul pure with the touch of angel's wings" would sound better.

I'm wishing you so many miles away
^^ this didn't really make sence... maybe somthing like "I wish for you, from many miles away"