Wow! That was a very neat poem...i think the flow was a tad off, but I really liked it, and I think anyone and everyone can relate to problems following them and keeping them up at night. Terrific job!
Charisma* (formerly Jpoet)
P.S. Glad to know you found me again...And it was a priviledge to have my poem used for your friend! Anytime...Charisma*

I really like this peace and I'm loving the internal rhymes you set up skillfully in there. Question: Why isn't this under the darker category? The shivers this peom sent up my spine certainly hinted it deserves to be in that section. Great write.

Aken Sol

Another stand out poem from you! I found it on the discussion board and am glad I did! 5/5